http://gr-s.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] gr-s.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] posic 2009-09-22 05:07 pm (UTC)

Прекрасно. Единственное, позволю себе дать непрошенный совет стилистического рода. Я бы советовал поменять обе entries с "современными людьми" на "ныне живущих людей".
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